Friday, February 26, 2016

The Orchard

 WALT: write a description that SHOWS rather that TELLS.


 The Orchard

I can see tall huge trees that smell minty and fresh. I can hear buzzing bees and birds humming. I can smell dirt,bark and hay around the tree. I can feel caterpillar crawling on my hand,biting my skin. I can see butterfly flying around it is so beautiful. Some of the plants were rough and smooth. The beautiful butterfly were shining so brightly.

1 comment:

Unknown said...

This is a great piece of writing Olidah - you have definitely described the scene very well.